Really interesting, especially where you write that “God” was punishing the “ungodly” natives of Americas, the concept around the faith is great! Good job!
nam.nguyen.200203
3 years ago
You guys did really good job on this essay. The way you open the essay by comparing the bubonic plague and the black death to the spread of disease in the New World really helps readers to better imagine and understand the disease exchange that the Europeans brought to Americas. You were able to write about how the Europeans and the indigenous people used the diseases as a biological warfare against each other. Both of those points are very well-explained and use great evidence to support it. You also mentioned in Covid-19, which I thought was a interesting addition to… Read more »
kostmant
3 years ago
A really interesting presantation. I paricularly enjoyed the synthesis that you followed and you took into consideraion the sources. Your approach around faith was impressive as well as that you keep a topical character refering to COVID 19. Well Done!
Konstantinos Mantis
rapporteur case study 1, week 2, Track B
Panteion University, Athens- Greece
rl18023
3 years ago
Thank you for your work. i recommend adding more space between the lines and writing smaller paragraphs. adding more pictures would be great too.
amunoza0024
3 years ago
Such a great job! I like the fact that in the beginning you explained the global context of your work because clarifying the situation and the characters involved helps to have a more precise idea and a better understanding for the information you add later. I found it a well-organized and interesting presentation where the results are clearly explained. However, I would like to give you some piece of advice: it would be much better if the challenge question appeared at the beginning of your work to specify what the main objective is. Anyway, it is an amazing work and… Read more »
Really interesting, especially where you write that “God” was punishing the “ungodly” natives of Americas, the concept around the faith is great! Good job!
You guys did really good job on this essay. The way you open the essay by comparing the bubonic plague and the black death to the spread of disease in the New World really helps readers to better imagine and understand the disease exchange that the Europeans brought to Americas. You were able to write about how the Europeans and the indigenous people used the diseases as a biological warfare against each other. Both of those points are very well-explained and use great evidence to support it. You also mentioned in Covid-19, which I thought was a interesting addition to… Read more »
A really interesting presantation. I paricularly enjoyed the synthesis that you followed and you took into consideraion the sources. Your approach around faith was impressive as well as that you keep a topical character refering to COVID 19. Well Done!
Konstantinos Mantis
rapporteur case study 1, week 2, Track B
Panteion University, Athens- Greece
Thank you for your work. i recommend adding more space between the lines and writing smaller paragraphs. adding more pictures would be great too.
Such a great job! I like the fact that in the beginning you explained the global context of your work because clarifying the situation and the characters involved helps to have a more precise idea and a better understanding for the information you add later. I found it a well-organized and interesting presentation where the results are clearly explained. However, I would like to give you some piece of advice: it would be much better if the challenge question appeared at the beginning of your work to specify what the main objective is. Anyway, it is an amazing work and… Read more »